All Comments on 'A Mother's Promise Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Please don't make us wait another 6 months

When are you planning to write chapter 5? Please keep writing. Wonderful story :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Total Rapture

Is this a love story? Its not your average erotic piece normally posted on a site like this. I loved all of it and I dont usually read incest stories. I read the first 3 chapters after I read this one and they are amazing. You put a lot of feeling and thought into them. Im going to talk to my little brother, too. Now I know what happened to all my underwear back then.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Having memorized chapters one through three I am

yet again driven into madness; my imagination spiraling into darkness awaiting the promise implied at the end of chapter four. You move from salacious to sublime with such ease and candor that--at least for me--this story is perfect.

jjws%)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Great Story

Great story can't wait for the next chapter

TonyTheTiger88TonyTheTiger88about 17 years ago
Absolutely fantastic

This series is incredibly exciting and definitely ranks among my top series. Your writing flows smoothly and your diction is dead-on. Thanks for continuing this superb tale and please, continue to do so in a timely manner! I can't wait to see where you take this exciting storyline. Thanks again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Panites

I am back in my panties again just like her son. Thank you for this. Keep them cuming. CAn not wait.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Loved it

Thank you for continuing this well-written story...what a ride!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
sexual intercourse next?

I love this sniffing panties. when the dad and sis gone mother and son can play openly. Mom can sit on her son's face and let him sniff her crotch. inhaling on her musky pussy odor. then she can teach him sexual intercourse.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
My favorite author is back! thankyou

After reading this one, I wish I had some one to steal my panties. LOL. Actually, Im ready to give them away. Here, take them please!!! As usual, this one builds up and leaves me wanting more. Your so good about giving me nice things to dream about at night. When do we get to see chapter 5?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
joy

this is one of my favourites, keep up your excellent writing

Zannah619Zannah619about 4 years ago
So hot

Another great chapter while reading this chapter I just had to reach for a pair of panties so good and hot

oldpantythiefoldpantythief12 months ago

Can't hardly beat this combination of mother/son erotic interaction and loads of panties to play with and wear. Glad it not too hard to read this story with only one hand on the mouse, lol. Another five

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