All Comments on 'A Mother's Rival for Her Son Ch. 02'

Don't make us wait too long for the next chapter(s). Excellant writing style. Gives one the feeling they are right there watching and not just reading.

I think it would be better if you went away from the incest portion of the story but just my 2 cents....

Hello it took me a while but I found it lol...love the twists!!!!! qu3tqu3t :p

I could not hold it any longer as I emptied my balls. Rope after rope shot deep into her. Her nails raking my back as she screamed out. Laughing we climbed out of the car and headed for the house. "Oh god I feel it inside of me. Don't stop, aggggg I'm cumming."

We laid there catching our breaths. My cock still deep inside her, slowly softening till I slipped out, our combined fluids flowing out soaking the blanket. I rolled off her and pulled her to me kissing her, telling her how much I loved her. She looked up at me and whispered.

How the hell did you get from the blankett into the car the laugh as you tumble out of the car into the house then ack to the blankett,,,

Proof rreading and editing goes along ways for crap like this

i cant be bothered to read further or even bother with any more of you writing