All Comments on 'A Mother's Solution - Ch. 01'
by naughty_kitty_xxx
- 37 Comments
Anonymousover 2 years agoI enjoy your writing style!
Looking forward to reading many more of your future stories
Such a delicious photo you posted!
Anonymousover 2 years agoWow!! I love these stories we're the mom & son flirt with each with kinky words. Please continue, I hope they become full incestuous lovers & he leaves Amy, who wants a boring girlfriend when you could have a hot incest mom 😜
Anonymousover 2 years agoWhat a great angle and appraise to a more believable theme. Looking forward to the next part.
TabooTales1over 2 years agoIt's a decent start. I prefer stories with a bit more build-up, especially multi-part stories, where we go deeper into the character's motivations. Why is the son so easily happy to fuck his mother? Why is the mother's immediate thought to bed her son in order to keep him from breaking up with Amy? Why not just tell him to break up with her? Obviously, she had considered her son prior or she's an incredibly impulsive woman. She doesn't seem like she's dying for a man's touch either.
Overall, I'm interested in how it continues and perhaps there will be more exposition filled in as the story continues.
LordDeanabout 2 years agoSo very well written. Your words painted loving and erotic pictures. Thank you for sharing
Thorny52about 2 years agoI loved your story,I hope that you continue, would to see more on this story.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoThe story was wonderful. You could maybe write a prologue as a build up. I know someone in real life that I believe takes care of her two socially awkward sons needs and may write it someday. Well written. Give us more!
P.S. I'll send you a private message once I reset my account!
Anonymousabout 2 years ago3 stars, why were they in a hotel? Carla teaches her son about sex. Everything on how to treat a female. Carla then meets up with Amy, and has a chat with her about her son and Amy and his relationship. Then trys to seduce Amy, offering to be there for Amy when her son seduces Amy to take her virginity thus saving their relationship. Or suggest Anal :). Thanks Sammie
Anonymousabout 2 years ago3 stars, why were they in a hotel? Carla teaches her son about sex. Everything on how to treat a female. Carla then meets up with Amy, and has a chat with her about her son and Amy and his relationship. Then trys to seduce Amy, offering to be there for Amy when her son seduces Amy to take her virginity thus saving their relationship. Or suggest Anal :). Thanks Sammie. More please.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoLoved it. Can't wait for the next chapter. Love your picture in the bio by the way.
tallman441about 2 years agoExcellent start. I think you should of included some back story. I assumed they were having a dinner at home. Some questions that need answering.
Where are they and why? Where is husband/dad? Age of mother? etc.
I am looking forward the next chapter.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoHOT start. I was confused about the hotel thing too, but don’t let that stop you from writing more. You can easily explain the reason for the settings in a few paragraphs. 5 stars sequel please?
Anonymousabout 2 years agoSo looking forward to more, 58 year old female, and.i love type of stories.
Love Sherri
delhootersabout 2 years agoAn enjoyable, well written story. I can see future stories from you either as a continuation of this story or something else in that naughty_kitty mind.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoWow ! Everyone is different, but for me, the best one I think I’ve ever read on here. What a talented writer ! With all due respect to one of the other commenters, the hotel room, where dad was, the backstory etc., didn’t matter. I can come up with all of that myself. Congrats on a well written story. I can’t wait for more. 5 stars ! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 😀
Anonymousover 1 year agoAbsolutely sucking fabulous, where is part 2, where she fucks his brains out? Cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire, UK.
ToughSailorabout 2 months agoGreat so far as it went. Definitely needs a follow-on chapter to get on with the promised fuck. UK spelling? . . . .
naughty_kitty_xxx12 days agoAuthorThanks to those who have posted such positive, enthusiastic comments--they were so encouraging! However, it's been a long time since I've felt confident enough to write something new. I do have a new story in the works...so anyone who enjoyed my debut attempt will have something soon from my pen. ;-) I don't think my style is particularly suited to long form (I actually like shorter erotica for that erotic bedtime hit ;-) ) and I fully appreciate the comments about backstory, characterisation and so on. Hopefully my next story will have something for everyone! Kat xxx
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