A Mother's Touch Ch. 06-08 & Final

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Her cunt was clenching around his cock, and he began a slow thrust, not losing steam, not wasting time. A large string of saliva fell onto his cock, and he lubed his cock again, now pushing against her pucker.

He used the head of his cock to smear the come sliding out from her, and added that as lube, entering his mother a second time, and taking her anal virginity with it. It was different, tighter, and her reaction something he would always remember in his future. All of his body was hurting, the sweat pouring down from his chest, her nails clawing his pecs as he fucked her to a new orgasm, where both lovers finally collapsed on the bed, and a record had been set.

They fell asleep as the afternoon warmth took over under the blankets, in the same bed she laid with his best friend. In his chest, a certainty that this was the right thing to do. In hers, the doubts were diluted, and she knew that, at least in that cabin, they could run away for a weekend and be happy.

Memories of James came flooding her dreams. Their first time. Their first fight. Their wedding. Was she happy? It was more like what was happiness, after all. In here, all her worries went away.

But it was all worth it as the night came, and they could see the stars above, through the opening in the ceiling. It was James' idea to have it installed, and now Marge was delighted to have Adam here with her.

Her body was aching, and there was a difficulty in walking she never knew before, while Adam continued as fresh as a lettuce, and if it was up to him, he'd go another few rounds again. His cock looked painfully hard.

Returning home was painful, but the day to day brought a sort of numbness. She encouraged Adam to get a tinder account, and she did one for herself as well, and mother and son created a new routine of swiping right in whoever they thought was the appropriate person for each other.

Tony and Natasha continued being their friends. Tony asked Adam what was that all about, and he revealed his secrets to him. His profound love for his mother, and how she helped him through the roughest period of his life. Tony didn't understand it fully, but learned how to respect his friend. As for Natasha, she wasn't hurt by the rejection he made her go through in the cabin, but that was an eye opener for her marriage, and she was now a happy divorced woman, looking for the love of her life. She swiped right on Adam's profile, and he took her on a date as friends.

The day Jennifer turned up on his doorstep was a day Adam won't forget. She wanted to get back together, and she heard Adam was now dating this girl that worked in a bar in the city center, and there was a rumour that he became quite the stud. Now, looking at Adam, she recalled how she was dedicated, and how much he cared for her, and how easy it was to manipulate him every time he jizzed in his pants. But Adam pointed out two things: one, he wasn't dating anyone, and that wonderful woman from the bar was nothing but a casual fuck, which he now embraced as a step towards freedom, and second, he'd rather fuck a cactus than to be with her again.

Tony showed up at the exact moment to observe how Jenny got red in the face, and took the opportunity to grab Adam by the waist, and asked her what did she want with his boyfriend.

Childish, yes, but effective. The tears she cried were crocodile tears and had no effect on Adam's self-esteem. He went on double dates with Tony, and then on more dates without him. The sex became stable, but he never forgot how his mother made him feel.

Then, on her birthday, he offered her two first-class tickets to Florence, one of the cities of love that she always talked about, and she invited him to come with her. For one week, they got to experience what life would be without a care in the world, watching sunsets while eating ice cream, and falling asleep in each other's arms.

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Mate, you write with skill. Some of the structure and descriptions are first class.

But I think you should spend more time developing interactions and character arcs with the new additions to the story, if you feel the need to bring in more people. I never felt that I connected with Tony as I his mother.

Also - and let’s be frank - this is a porn story, slow burn or not. I think a lot of us would have like better and clearer descriptions of the sex acts. Personally, I don’t feel that brushing over them adds anything positive to how tasteful the story is. You had already built that in and it’s classy.

I wrote this on good faith and hope to provide encouragement, not the opposite!

walkindatdogwalkindatdog10 months ago

"they fell asleep... in the same bed she laid with his best friend". WHAT?! Are you saying that Marge and Tony did the nasty? Did i miss something? Your ending was ever so rushed. Instead of writing dialogue you related what was said. It's far harder to parse your meaning that way and less powerful. Jennifer shows up and instead of dialogue, you've given us the whole interaction in a couple paragraphs. And wouldn't jenny blab at volume about Adam and Tony's homosexual love? And you dang near skipped right past the whole mother and son dynamic. They came home from the cabin and...? WTF?! How did they figure out how to proceed with their love for each other? You don't say, just that they could always run away to the cabin. And Marge turning them both out to Tinder cheapens your whole flippin' story! I got off real good-like when they finally got down. While i love anal sex, it was never mentioned and all of a sudden, he's in her ass? just lube up with some semen and ram it in? no lubing her up? The first gal i pluked could accept me right in without lube, but that has been the exception. Like i say: i got off cuz the story was sweet and hot and then we all got dumped by a rushed ending.

Also: get an editor or at least read your work over. With your stuff, if i were you i"d read it out loud and see if can't find all the glaringly obvious problems, such as: keep the writing in the past tense, normal for 3rd person viewpoint; countless times you slip to present tense verbs, etc. At least your spelling's not bad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

For real Tony? Dude you suck writing stories. The Mc is Adam not tony! Who gives a fk about him. Well I bet your a cuck

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Excellent story. 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It was a wierd story with no proper character archs getting completed. Could have shown more of how Adam learned to control his timing and instead of opening everything up he should have gotten both or only his mother. And this could have been done without disclosing their secret, it made no sense. Made Tony look dumb and hero at the same time when we wanted to see Adam hero all the time.

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