by Van999
This story served no purpose, either as erotic material or as jerk off material. It had no hidden moral and wasn't stimulating sexually on it's own. If he had found out that she was a virgin after he raped her that might have made it better.
Dont understand your story.... He calls his own daughter a whore at the end? WTF... I didnt even read the last page, just scrolling down.... Thats messed up
Started off in a good direction but ended up being such an ugly story. What a shame as it was getting good until the end.
... Alles hat so gut angefangen. Ich habe mich auf eine zärtliche Liebesgeschichte eingestellt, aber der weitere Verlauf der Handlung hat mich gelinde gesagt sehr verwirrt.
Trotzdem habe ich 4 Sterne gegeben, weil die Story gut geschrieben und die Entwicklung interessant ist. Ich bin gespannt, wie es weiter geht.