All Comments on 'A Mutual Learning Experience Ch. 14'

I felt like there might be more to share in this story series. The end just felt like a wet blanket.

Have to agree with earlier comment. This seems rushed compared to your usual writing. Especially towards the end. It felt like you were desperate to finish this series and move on. So much build-up towards a family merger, only to "mention" it in the epilogue.

I liked the story. This is the first story I think I have read that you created. I have readabout 500 incestuous love stories, mostly involving mother and son. While reading this story, I felt no psychological nor emotional idetification with any character. I felt no chemistry with any character. The story felt two dimentional. I rated each chapter a 4, which is a good rating for me.