All Comments on 'A Naughty Affair Ch. 04'

YES! That's what I am talking about. More action between Hunter and Bree. Such as, penetration finally, exhibitionist, fucking while Hunter is in the phone to Vanessa, sex in the same bed...MORE between Hunter and Bree.

I don't know what other people think but I love the story as it is; one on one. I think the plot and naughtiness would be ruined if you were to add threesome into the mix.

Thank you. Not only is it explicit, but the story line is well written.

If you don't continue this series I might actually die. It is so well written and amazingly thought of. I would love to see many more chapters :3

Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback! I will do my best to incorporate what you all want to see with where I want this story to head. The next part is being written now and should be up soon xxxx

Hello! I love the storyline thus far! Amazing character developments. I agree with both comments below. I also believe in the one on one aspect. Hunter uses both sisters in different ways; Vanessa is the readily available girlfriend and Bree is becoming the submissive. I just think it wouldn't work out so hotly, but that is just my opinion as well. I'd love to see more exhibitions with Hunter and Bree. That'd be so naughty if they were going at while one of them is talking to Vanessa on the phone. Can't wait to read about the couple more!! (;

So well written, can't wait for more

This actually has to be one of my favourite stories on here. Really can't wait for more chapters!

Hi Everyone,

My computer broke a while back and I am buying another one soon! Unfortunately that means that I will have to retype the next chapter again :( apologies!

Glad to hear you are continuing this story. I check nearly every day for an update!

will there be another chapter?? i love this story so much

Anymore?!??