by Cloudless_Skye
Great story of seduction, control and dominance. I would love to see more of your work! That is a great story and how it was written is very sexy.
I really want the badboy's real life game to match his erotic one. Is big sis complicit or just oblivious? No one knows but the potentially very, very talented Coudless_Sky.
Full marks * * * * *
That was pretty good for being your first chapter. You left plenty of space for another one. Do you plan on continuing it or was this just a one shot? I hope you continue!
Thank you all for the kind feedback everyone!! The 2nd part is undergoing editing now and should be up soon ;)