All Comments on 'A Naughty Affair'

by Cloudless_Skye

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weaponxwriterweaponxwriterover 7 years ago
Loved it

Great story of seduction, control and dominance. I would love to see more of your work! That is a great story and how it was written is very sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Steamy

Hot and sexy! Love it, can't wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great story!

Incredible story!! NEED MORE!!

gabbysistagabbysistaover 7 years ago

This was hot! I agree with others, need more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Next Chapter Please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

More please

GrandtimehobbyGrandtimehobbyover 7 years ago

What a great job. Please keep up the great work.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 7 years ago
this could go so many places

I really want the badboy's real life game to match his erotic one. Is big sis complicit or just oblivious? No one knows but the potentially very, very talented Coudless_Sky.

Full marks * * * * *

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Amazing!

That was pretty good for being your first chapter. You left plenty of space for another one. Do you plan on continuing it or was this just a one shot? I hope you continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Can I come now???

Can I come now please??

Cloudless_SkyeCloudless_Skyeover 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

Thank you all for the kind feedback everyone!! The 2nd part is undergoing editing now and should be up soon ;)

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