All Comments on 'A Nephew Come to Stay Ch. 02'

Love the humiliation stuff. Just not sure what the need for torture and violence is all about.

It fits with the fantasy of the alpha.

Another great story, sadist rejoice ^^

Not to my liking. Perverted.

Your description of sex was lacking to say the least.

Just like your other story first chapter amazing second chapter pure garbage just went on and on and nothing interesting or exciting happened whole time. Same problem in both stories no woman gets destroyed and tamed and a dominating bitch right after c'mon man

...is that Bobby is totally apathetic/uncaring about the situation. In fact, he's actually a bit "chummy" with Mark; not really hateful or domineering with him at all. Unlike Mark's mom, who downright hates her revolting son (which I find to be really, really hot, thank you very much)!

Bobby didn't take Butterscotch to be mean to Mark; she was just a pussy and pussy gets conquered. If Mark also gets conquered as a result, then so be it (if he really even notices or cares that Mark is being conquered).

I loved the focus on Mark in this story,and though there were some short scenes between his mom and Bobby, I do wish there had been some more here, especially where he "rejects" her. But I'm glad she's taking her "frustrations" out on her worthless son.

I wonder what will happen when his sisters come home? Do they also enjoy torturing their brother? Will the whole family get together and torture him at once? Will they convince Bobby to join in and change his attitude from apathetic towards Mark to downright hateful?

So much to look forward to! Please post more soon!

Top notch So fucking hot.!

Have you ever thought of drawing the characters to your stories? Also, this chapter was nice, but I would've preferred more longer sexual interactions between characters instead of random sex act A to random sex act act B.

You should totally do a third chapter dude like what happens after that you know please do one!!!

I feel bad for Mark. He should find a way to get back at them or at least a way to have sex :/

he should have fucked auntie and made her his bitch for life keep writing

You have to make Bobby fuck his aunt, come on! :(

In part 3 I would like to see an orgy with mark being fucked in public, more sexy bimbos, more description of the orgy and Mark watching his former girlfriend fucked good.

Loved the story

I was rooting for Mark :( Not every woman is into giant cocks.

I really hate it how everyone in yer story treats Mark. Couldn't you at least put a part where they all have Sympathy over him? Like they just realized how wrong it is to treat him badly? >:'(

THe story just doesn't make a lot of sense.

It's like everyone in Mark's life is set up to humiliate him, a set up that's been going on for years.

And he just suddenly gets an urge to wear women's panties and get fucked by his mother, who's suddenly a dominatrix?

Needs a LOT of work.

Dont care for mark. Weakling.

Love Bobby. Want to read more of him in a reverse gangbang

First part wasn't bad but this was just sad, routine boring sex with a shitty girl at the end. And no one could be so weak smh that was the worst part of all. No attempt to defend himself in the slightest. A third part should occur, with sad Mark snapping and taking revenge on everyone. Maybe pissing on Butterscotch while her parents watch

Major overkill in how mark gets treated. I mean I understand the fetish and the whole domination thing, but I feel like it was overdone. There is, unfortunately, a limit to these things and you definitely went past that. Give the kid a break! Let him get some ass, everyone (EVERYONE) deserves little ass every now and then. It doesn't have to be with a hot bitch, maybe just an ugly slut or something, but its just wrong how mark gets treated.

I get everyone of these people minus Mark is a reprehensible jackhole.

I don't get the incessant need for some of the racist language...

Are all dominants abusive bigots also?

There isn't a single redeeming character and the sex is written lazily...

Another giant penis, because no normal sized human has ever made a woman happy.

No normal breasts because only big boobs are interesting.

It is like you copy and pasted the most low denominator tripe that a hack porn writer from fifty years ago would have had as a rejected first submission.

Waste of time for any one with twenty connected brain cells.

dam, everyone abused mark. including the writer. that is sad

This story is abhorrible!!! I hope there are really no mothers out there like this. Ugh, nothing was a turn on!!!

That didn’t go in the direction I thought it would. Thought the cousin would fuck the aunt. What a let down…

Yea this was crap. For a girlfriend to have given that ass to multi times to others could u not have had mark just get his nut off. It was quite preditable that Bobby was going to fuck her but u could have had Mark smash first at least