All Comments on 'A Nephew Come to Stay'
by markydaysaid
- 28 Comments
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoAmazing can't wait for the next parts. Loved it but want to read more about Bobbys school adventures as well.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoWTF? You had something good going on but you stopped. I can't rate this one. SHIT!
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoi like it much.bring more chapters of it.hope it gets interesting and there is penetration and possible pregnancy?or a ffm with aunts daughter,or maid.it sure has more to give.well done.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoThis story is your best yet!
I can't wait to see what happens next!
I loved how the mother is dominant and greedy that she considers her own children as brats and slaves, and I really can't wait to see what she and Bobby decide to do with her weak son. Of course, I'm sure his sisters would be happy to help out as well!
goliath13almost 12 years agoI would highly suggest getting an editor. While this piece had some merit, the grammar and punctuation could use some work. Keep at it, you'll get better.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoI want to feel you cum inside my raped cunt and use me like a semen-toilet.
That is funniest line I have ever seen in a story on here.
tonny13587almost 12 years agoIt was a very good story line but the many typos and other errors in your story were a HUGE distraction making it very difficult to enjoy. I suspect that you did not even proofread it yourself or, surely, you would have caught the more obvious errors, at the very least! I am surprised that you won with this story!
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoIt was pretty hot in some parts, but it's a pity you chose to make the main female character a racist shitbag. That's a really unpleasant negative. A woman can be strong and even dominant without being a horrible person.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoThat was the best story I've ever read here. I hope ths is a series.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoWhat a racist piece of shit, you shouldnt be allowed to post here or anywhere else.
Anonymousover 11 years agoWhat a load of crap! In all the time I have been reading on this site, and this is the first time that I am so disappointed in a story. You think this is enjoyable for the reader, I agree with the other comment, I don't know where you should should be writing but it's not here, try going back to bathroom walls.
Anonymousover 11 years agokeep going great story. i think it be interest to have a competitive between him and female like him to see who was the winner.
Anonymousover 11 years agoI liked it, it was good and I was surprised by the negative reviews, but the part I loved the most was the "semen toilet" phrase. To me, that is new, and you don't hear "new" anywhere, especially on here
Anonymousover 11 years agoNobody writes stories on this site that are as creative, imaginative, or boundary-pushing as yours! Please update your stories soon!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoFor this I used a couple of Nichole Scherzinger head shots and a "from the neck down" pic of a thick ass latina glamor model with tits like what. Then we masturbate like little monkeys. :)
Lust_of_dragonover 10 years agoThis was pretty nice, But I'd like to see what Bobby did to his mother as well as seeing him destroy his cousins. including that bitch Sadie. You could make a series with this overmuscled, alpha troll stud, fucking woman after woman, or having orgies with his harems. the possiblities are endless!
Anonymousover 5 years agoThe racial slurs took over this work, I couldn't really appreciate it. Maybe keep the racist comments out next time- they're such a turnoff.
Anonymousover 3 years agoI have never read a story where I loathed the two protagonists more. Both Aunty and Nephew are contemptible.
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