All Comments on 'A New Adventure'

Another willing stupid cuck, I still don't get the willingness of a husband wanting another man to fuck his wife I'm sure he can't genuine love her even though he may say he does.

It's OK but there are quite a lot of little mistakes in the writing, and the sentence structure is not very good. It does seem quite realistic - I think I believe you that it's a true story!

Ah, dating in the new century. We won't even go out for coffee first - let's just swap pictures of our genitals before we even speak and if the penis and the breasts are impressive enough we can hook up. Very romantic.

Nonetheless, I like the story, in spite of the typos and other errors.

You need to edit more carefully, but it's a good little story and I gave it 5 stars.