All Comments on 'A New Adventure Every Day Pt. 02'

by ScattySue

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

What a wonderful guided tour into the inner workings of Sam's mind and body. This is educational! I have spent a lifetime trying to figure out things that you are able to express in words. The intense mixing of all the senses. Makes me wish I was young and uninhibited in a new life and time. I have yet to be revolted by anything, in fact just the opposite. I love this love story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Exceptional Writing!_ What A Beautiful Love Story!

Sue your stories are beautiful, romantic, hot and sexy. It's just amazing, the way you breath life into your characters, with just a laptop keyboard. Amazing!!

Wow! I love reading hot lesbian sex stories, and I cant wait to see what you have in-store for Sam and Meg next...

Thank you so much for sharing.

Gay Kat.

luvcum99luvcum99over 9 years ago
Another great read from Sue!

Another well written section detailing Sam's big New Adventure. Definitely takes us on an emotional and sensual roller coaster with the main characters. Can't wait for the next part!

polynicespolynicesover 9 years ago
Still developing ...

... with some shockingly sexy moments ...

eros53eros53almost 4 years ago
Great characters

Your characters are alive, and lively, and believable. I like them and care about them. The secondary character are still fairly thin but well set up for future expansion. The emotions feel real and I want these two lovely women to find happiness with each other. Looking forward to a deeper, loving relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

I am not a fan of scat play and almost skipped the story but I read another one yours I loved so I thought I would give it a try. The way you handled it was beautiful and opened my eyes to why people would like it. So thanks for the story and the new perspective!

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 2 years ago

Wonderful erotic romantic poetry

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well written. I'm glad that in the end Sam overcame her reservations and found fulfillment in her relationship and intimacy with Meg. It's good for them both. The sex at the end of the Chapter was amazing. An earlier, I liked the toilet scene where Meg opened her anus and released her turd in front of Sam. Despite her reservations at the time, Sam appeared to appreciate the beauty of what she was witnessing.

And now to Chapter 3. Looking forward to reading more.

D Ellerbeck

_robin_robin10 months ago

I love ScattySue’s stories. So gentle, considerate & loving. And in this one, the fairytale element seems so strong. Five cottages adjoining a magic woodland, and all the denizens are women!

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