All Comments on 'A New Beginning'

I really enjoyed the way your story let us follow these two on their journey of enlightenment. I hope there is more to cum.

Was it just me or was the main character's name Tai at the beginning and Rachel at the end? Anyway, I couldn't finish it because of the poor grammar and structure, consider finding an editor and re-posting.

How is it that Tai got a man in there?? Why?? I really wish that had not been part of the story. Why would she hurt Rachel like that?

A NEW BEGINNING when will the next chapter and ending be