All Comments on 'A New Beginning Ch. 01'

You have really got my mouth watering.

"A New Beginning" has ADVENTURE

written all over it....Thanks !

Sorry, I like the concept of this story, but there was just too much info in the backstory to make it an enjoyable read. Too many details at once that have nothing to do with what's going on in the story. Especially for a "spoken" section.

I like the pure science fiction feel so far but you ignore part of human nature. We love nicknames. Cell TV-phone is too cumbersome, probably just cell would be used. Prostitute? No way for a paid position on a ship. Probably something like Rec Assistant or Therapist officially, maybe flutist in the vulgar. Construction worker would definitely be nicknamed, like drone jockey or graphhead if they use graphene for construction.