All Comments on 'A New Beginning Pt. 01'

This has some serious potential so keep it up!

4* for this one.

But I loved it anyway. Great romance, good story. I hope you keep going.

Omg that was the best end to the 1st chapter

Loved the ending, please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.

Their common interest in gaming was a strong clue. I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going.

Not until the nursery rhyme did I catch on. I would love you to continue this in full romantic fairy take mode.

Got so engrossed in the story I missed the clues, but waiting for chapter 2 (or 3).

Love it...keep it going!

Great one! almost bailed but something pulled me back...

solid 4 1/2

glad there's a follow up

and interesting screen name....

Great romantic story. That ending was fairy-tale material, like we were driving along in what we thought was Texas, only to pass a sign proclaiming Welcome to Montana.