All Comments on 'A New Beginning Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
4-stars

With some editing just to remove typos and sentences it's a 5

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
nice style

Thinking of them 69ing while wearing their wives' panties is a turn-on!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
great submission

so erotic...............made me tingle all over. Can't wait to see what comes next!

69plus169plus1almost 7 years ago
Punctuation and separating dialog

Very hot story but who is talking? What is dialog and what is story line?

Cockyme1948Cockyme1948about 6 years ago
HOT

This was a great story, I would love my first time would be this way and I have a friend that if he brought it up I would love to for a BFWB

AmberMichelleWAmberMichelleWover 1 year ago

Very good story...seems natural and honest...and very hot!

bobbyinhoustonbobbyinhouston11 months ago

Great story! I wished I had neighbors like you. I am looking forward to when the wives join.

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