All Comments on 'A New Beginning Pt. 02'

Great story and you left it hanging 🤦🏼‍♂️ ,, oh boy ,,, where is this going ???? The husband shows up at the door ,,, wow

I can’t wait for the next chapter to be released

Excellent

Please keep this story going

I gave you 5 stars but you must use a spell check program and then proofread your next submission before posting. Too many errors in this chapter.

A great read. Even at only 18 he has an unbelievable appitite

For sex. Keep the story going.

Loving it 👊🏼

Nice cliff-hanger!

I anxiously await part III.

Did NOT see that coming. This here will be damn interestin...LOL! 5*

You sir are an intriguing writer. I really like the way you paint the image of the era and the character of the region. Having grown up in northeast Tennessee and southwest Virginia in the 50’s and 60’s, I can relate to a lot of the rural mannerisms you detail. The story flows well, not stalling out, and is anything but a quick “ stroke story”. I’m anxious to read the coming chapter(s). Well done sir.👏👏

He knows how to tell a story that keeps the reader glued to the screen. Bravo! Keep it up, always.

Oh I'm so looking forward to the next chapter. As a history buff you do a great job of drawing the pictures of this tine period in my mind, thank you

I'm excited to read more soon

Another excellent chapter. Can't wait to read what happens next.

If you don't do the next chapter, I'll never forgive you......

Excellent story, liking where this young man is heading, and taking his family. Looking forward to the rest of Jake's story. Five stars!

The women are way too old for the sex they are having. Ever heard of menopause?

It drastically changes things for women. Beyond this fetish stuff you seem to like the story itself is ok and interesting the dustbowl period is portrayed well and the break into the Texas oilfields with Morgan starting off is good.

Scores at 4/5, the fetish sex is off putting but easily bypassed.

That's the thing about a fantasy. It can be whatever you want it to be. What rule say's every story has to be a TV reality show? It's a story that is what it is. The really nice thing about a site like this, is it's free. I'm not being paid to spend my time writing it. A lot of people enjoy it for what it is. Just as many simply don't stick around to read it. That's their choice.

Awesome 5 stars!!!!!!!!!

Great story!!! To all the people bad mouthing older pussy, you really don't know what you're missing. Older women try much, much harder when it comes to pleasing a man. I've had it from the teens to the 70's, and older is always just as good, and many times better!!

The story was messed up when you wrote that Elsie came back with her baby in one instance and didn't mention it until they went to pickup the child before leaving for home.

Loving this story and your representation of the Depression in Texas. Just have to point out that women didn’t use “Ms.” until decades later. His teacher would have been “Miss” as most female teachers in that era were unmarried. Really enjoying your style of writing!

@Aninymozs about Ms. In those days they used Miz, which is close enough. I like to think of it as the author trying to modernise it for younger readers 😄

I just didn't add the part where she left Samuel in the care of others for a time.

As far as Ms, Miss, Miz I'm aware of the mannerisms based on reading family letters, diaries and journal from that era. This is written to simplify the reading of it.

I'm writing several story lines simultaneously, as well as developing a continuing series of romance novels that follows an unorthodox as well as nontraditional, genre.

I'm writing these as a hobby. When I began Time Never Waits, as well as this story, A New Beginning, I literally had no idea about where the story lines wwere going. I did no particular research outside of the study of history I've conducted throughout my life.

Is it perfect? No. Without the occasional mistake or oversight? Absolutely not.

I hope y'all enjoy these stories for what they are. A way to put yourself in the shoes of the characters as they unfold

I'm enjoying it so far