All Comments on 'A New Beginning Pt. 03'

Very entertaining so far, keep on writing.

Why 🤦🏼‍♂️ ,,, did you hang it again,,, you cause me to keep looking for the next chapter daily,, great 5⭐️ story and series ,, well written ,,, 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻

Is the character JP Morgan one of the things you mentioned ???

Please continue this story . It has the makings of a very good Series Thank you

First time I so thoroughly enjoyed an episode with no sex to speak of. I know thats not what this site is for, but those of us who have been following this tale know exactly what I'm talking about...great stuff...keep going!!!

Love it. Can’t wait for the next one

Leave him in pieces that the doctor doesn't recognize... Loving it!

I liked the cross over of this story, very happy with it :)

Waiting for the next part. I actually miss the days when you could settle things man to man.

Great series! Well written narrative and steady plot progression is keeping my interest piqued. I think the handing over property and women flocking to him is a bit overplayed, but solid otherwise. 5*

Please continue the story!!!

I'm really enjoying this story. Please continue!

I thought about the property aspect being overplayed. As well as them flocking to him. In my mind, I'm looking at it from a perspective of the era. Women didn't enjoy the benefit of the power curve they have today. Remember, this was 1930. People were beginning to grasp the reality of the state of affairs the country was facing. The women in most any rural area suffered from the same sense of helplessness. Mrs Johnson was an exception. Her issue was being in a fortunate position to have options. Jacob has proved himself to be dependable and trustworthy to a fault. She signed everything over to him because she wanted out. To retire down on the coast. So, she made her deal with him. She knows in the end, he'll hold true to his word. So, she's lost nothing. As far as him being so attractive, well, he's big, strong, intelligentl, hard working and ambitious. And single. In an era when all the others like him were married off. So, that made him a rare commodity. Of course he's going to enjoy females pursuing him.

Great story ... c'mon part 4!!

This is the best story I have read. I get to the end and still want more, simply captivating.

I just finished Chapters 1 - 3 last night. I like the general story, and I’m looking forward to the next Chapter. Thanks.

I’m enjoying this series quite a lot.

Well, if I wanted to count anomalies and such I’d return to editing. I found more than a few along with typogooficals but I chose to ignore them to continue reading for pleasure. And it’s a pretty good yarn so far, thank you very much!

-Southerncross909

Loved this story 5 stars!!!!!!!

All I can say is ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Just wanted to point out if you can correct them...some name errors...Mrs. Johnson to Mrs. Richards and Mercedes to Maggie.

Yeah, some times I get a name messed up

"treed coon looking down at a carbide light." Probably not many on here have coon hunted with a carbide light. Either you've done your research well or you're my people.