All Comments on 'A New Chapter Pt. 01'

Very good story. Keep them coming

I usually like more tension and teasing as buildup to the incestuous coupling, but this was fun and well written, so I enjoyed it. 5*s!

Daddy needs to breed all 3 of his women to start his next generation of fuckables!

not your best work, however. needed a little more tease, build-up at the beginning. but it was fun to read, and had some great sex. so.........

Omg Brett you have done it again, you horny decadent fucker, like me you adore cunt and all it's pleasures, all that lush cunt juice. More and more of this please and soon like tomorrow, my two live in girls and I are going to act this story out right now, and keep doing each other till we pass out from the insane multi orgasmic pleasures of the flesh. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lancashire uk.

Sex was great. But no tease. Very short. Left me wanting more. Maybe that’s good. But I didn’t think so.

Thanks for a rousing vison of lusty family happiness!

Love your stories. Except this one I didn't even finish

It's not perfect but it's still a very great story none the less, glad to see you back and can't wait to read more of this story

THIS STORY IS REALLY HOT AND I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. I HOPE YOU WRITE CLEARLY WHAT MOTHER AND THE TWO SISTERS DO WITH EACH OTHER WHILE THEIR DADDY WATCHES ON.

It should be a rule that no-one can post a title with 'Pt. 01' or 'Chapter-One' unless the next part is already finished and approved. It's frustrating.

I only say that because it happens so often. I understand why an author might want to wait for feedback on one part of a story before deciding to write another chapter, but he/she should take into consideration that the vast majority of people who read these stories don't comment on them.

Ya know, when a married partner pulls that shit, they should be killed where they stand. Appropriate rating

I hate when great stories like this promise more (after all it is a PT1) and never deliver! :(