All Comments on 'A New Dawn Ch. 03'

Part 4 please

Don't leave us hanging for a year?

... for not turning these two entirely sweet stories into two dudes sharing their loving 'families' with each other. For some reason that really would have ruined this now intertwined story for me.

Great work, another 5/5!

the characters come to life in my head and the story spins out as real as it can get...just loving it

I've got to agree. I am totally hooked on this story. I appreciate that writing is hard, but please, please keep going on this one. It is simply one of the best, most engaging stories I've read in a while.

As Mr Burns says, "Exxxcellent!"

Seriously, this is the only story I've read here that didn't make me cum, and I mean that in the best possible way! :) this should be shopped for a movie deal! I cant wait for part 4. Great great read! Thanks for the entertainment, chunks!

I just hope you have plans to finish story line It had me so emo holy smokes plz continue writing and keep up the good work thankyou

Seriously I cant wait

Read all three and find you can write stories without sex because you have a very good sense of continuity and flow to your stories. You have a policeman that does police work and still has a life, although a strange one. I like that you do not repeat stuff over and over as though it would add anything to the story. Great job on all 3. I wanted to keep following the police side of the plot but I will wait. Thanks

I would love to see these stories and the intervention stories be made into well acted movies.

Johnny seems to be a stand-up guy and I understand not wanting other men to f*** my women. I hope we don't cross that line it'll ruin the story for me if we do.

Wonderful man you are simply best story teller 👍👍👍👍👍

... to bring the characters from your two different stories together. An interesting touch.

Five stars and, if you'll excuse me, I need to go find out what happened with Meyer.

Pretty good story, but getting sort of confused with all of the women. There is sex for love and sex for lust, why can't they just get on with it and have fun; forget all of the stealing shit.

Great story telling, very sexy. Five stars.

5+ stars. Great storyline. Great sex. Both evolving in parallel modes. Damm good!

In this adult cruise ship story, you raise questions about monogamy and real love vs pure sex. I don't like the way this story line is going at this time. Meyer's shooting was a good way of taking a break from the heavy stuff. I'll see where it goes or if I jump off this cruise.

No more than a weak and reluctant 4* due to the orientation of the story line direction at this point.

BJ

What a great story, I hope there is more

Great story, great writing. Five stars.

Continuing greatness... thank you.

Great story sank down. I don't like sharing my women, so this story fell out of favour for me.