All Comments on 'A New Dawn Ch. 10'

Thank you for this!!! I sure hope you have many more up your sleeve! This entire series is golden.

(so short though) :(

So nice to see you writing again!, love your work!

I did a full re-read of the series before reading this latest installment. You write well. I like your stories. Please continue. :)

that was a disappointing addition. it's like you don't even care anymore about these great characters and stories you've created. what a bummer. they deserve better.

Looking forward to more!

Great story! 5 stars!

Great series!!! So many angles left. Would LOVE to read more!

I loved the complete story. Excellent written. I'm looking forward to more of your work. Keep writing and we'll keep reading.

Please tell me there is more to this story. I know he is a natural born shooter (military term) and would like to possibly see more of him being tactical about things instead of a bullet sponge.

I realized that I'm going to have to wait like a year for part 11, but I'm hoping that in addition to seeing Jerry get used to life with Jonny and friends, I'd like to see more of Kimmy and Laura. They've definitely felt like afterthoughts in the last couple chapters.

Loved it keep going fucking A

ERROR. It is noted that Johnny was not shot in the Service, and had been shot twice - including the incident with the President, since leaving the Rangers. He was shot rescuing his friends from the kidnappers (chest wound above the body armour), and when he was in the hospital when shot in the chest and head by a cop after saving a cop (standing over her holding a gun) - with the head wound that took his memory temporarily. When he checked the tape on his chest, it mentions that there was a bullet wound next to the scar from an old bullet wound. That's two - three counting the glancing head shot, but at least two, prior to being shot protecting the President. Seems to me there was another bullet wound, but I can't recall at the moment. At any rate, you might want to change that comment about Johnny needing to find a new line of work, now being shot twice since leaving the Rangers. I'm not trying to be a PITAP (pain in the ass pedant), I love your work and if I can help out by clarifying and correcting an error, it would make me happy,

This is by far the best series I have ever read! Period.

Looking forward to a new chapter! Please!