by Excited1now
It depends on your POV
It would have been improved by continuing it to include the expelling of the fluid and the subsequent love making.
I give it a 4 for effort and hope to see more soon from this promising writer.
Definitely a good start! Would love to see you expand some more about their sex and her pleasing more
I never understand those that click on a story with an obvious title and then complain about what's written. I give you five stars dude. It worked for me. You really need to have her expel that enema though, just a suggestion.
5 Stars to your story for its interesting kinky twist. Ignore the anonymous trolls! Why be horrified by a story when its category, title, and tags tells you what's coming. A bit longer if you please. Looking forward to another episode between Kari and her Daddy.
I was given enemas as a young child by my mother. I was embarrased because every time she gave me an enema,I got an erection. (Oedipus thoughts?) anyway she continued them until i was about to start my first high school. I loved the way the larger douche nozzle felt going up my ass. She periodically put a smaller nozzle on and connected it to a long rubber colon tube to clean me out a little deeper in the colon.Then no more enemas. I told my wife i wanted them when we got married and she never did it once. We’re divorced and if i could find an anally erotic woman I’d try again!!! Any interested ladies out there that would loike this?
Loved the story I love enemas and like to take enema between sex and then be filled up I love to be fudked while full