All Comments on 'A New Family Summer Tradition'

one page is way too short for this story

If the author was going to submit a boring story that failed to go anywhere (except for a childish fantasy sequence--the only thing missing was their telling us the protagonist's height, weight and cock size!), I'd prefer they wrap it up quickly so that I can move on to a story that isn't boring and lame. Which, once more, this was.

And THIS isn't INCEST!

Keep up the good work.

Why wait. Give her pleasure daily.

Can't wait for the next chapter

This story should have been longer and more complete.

We need a second part...

Thank you for all the comments, both positive and negative. I understand this might have been a little bit short, but since it was my first story ever, I wanted to see the reception it got before continuing with it. For all of you that liked it, there's a second part in the making. Also, I do understand this is not incest as the characters are not biologically related, but the category includes "taboo" also, which I think fits. I mean fucking your stepmom or dad's girlfriend is not accepted yet as normal in most societies... but anyway, if you have any better suggestions for the category, feel free to comment as well as any other ideas or things you'd like to see in the sequel. I don't promise they will be included, but who knows...

Too easy, there's no conflict. This could have just as easily been a two word story, "We fucked." There needs to be a conflict to resolve to make a story.