by NightmarePrincess
I enjoyed this story very much, the writing was smooth and flowing and the theme was honest and true. Keep up the excellent work.
Even though I think you're a lowlife smutsling trailer trash whore from Ohio, I still think you should stay with Romance and STOP the incest and rape stories
This is a beautifully written romance story, with a good if rather too brief introduction. However, that introduction is in perfect proportion to the love scene which follows. This story has real potential to go much farther as a story, and it is a shame that it is so short.