All Comments on 'A New Friend at the Party'

This story is well-written, and it has excellent characters and a great setting, but it is far too short. Perhaps the author will consider continuing it, as the story has great possibilities.

Good story with an enjoyable flowing style. Characters were well described and their emotions were nicely integrated. Don’t get hung up on writing epic long novels - too many stories on Lit go on for dozens of episodes, and you either lose track or get bored. Nothing wrong with a good short story! Thanks.