All Comments on 'A New Kind of Family Ch. 01'

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tallman441tallman4419 months ago

Good story. I think he should get permission from the mother to train her.

5 stars

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Decent start but there are a few spelling errors that make it difficult.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

More please

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

It leaves the door open to exploring sexual encounters with Kaitlyn, which I would very much like to read about.

ToughSailorToughSailor5 months ago

Nice start to possibly a good story. Needs more chapters to flesh it out. Oh yeah, FYI there was no incest let alone any sex . . . .

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