All Comments on 'A New Leaf'

by headdoctor

Sort by:
  • 12 Comments
DonricoDonricoabout 11 years ago
Absotively Posolutely Fantabulously Splendiforous !!!

This story is so deep. One has to really read every feeling as it progressed between the two women then to the son.

This story is very well written and extremely successful. Thank you for the pleasure.

I loved it.

floaturboatfloaturboatabout 11 years ago
Exceptional!

Excellent story and expertly delivered. This story still has legs, stating the obvious. I hope the author continues it.

AhabscribeAhabscribeabout 11 years ago
Bravo!

An outstanding debut. A very erotic tale with a fresh voice. You put us in the room and the only fault I can find is that it ended too son! Looking forward to your next!

imharmless69imharmless69about 11 years ago
outstanding

Can't wait for more from this new voice!

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftabout 11 years ago
I do hope you continue this.

Absolutely breathtaking.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
at last

Now that is how to write a story, just beautiful, please continue

ansdguyansdguyalmost 11 years ago
Amazing!

What everyone else has said is completely accurate.

bebhinnbebhinnabout 10 years ago
Fabulous!

An incredibly well written, deep story. It is always refreshing to make a connection with the characters. I very much enjoyed it and I look forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Wonderful story

Well written, good story line. Wish this author had more. I stumbled upon this story, seeing it in the "random" list and was pleasantly surprised. This story belongs in the classics section.

HoltarenHoltarenover 6 years ago
Wow

What a fantastic story. The potential is endless. Would really love to read more chapters, but sadly there weren't any. Please Mr 'Headdoctor', carry on with your excellent writing.

ThunderpogoThunderpogoover 2 years ago

That was a very interesting take on the mother-son arrangement, thoroughly enjoyed it.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aover 1 year ago

This is an unusual story with a very creative ending. Although too often in real life, self-confidence, self-assured individuals lack the courage to express their true feelings to the one they actually love. They never realize, love is never wrong.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous