All Comments on 'A New Lease on Life'

by Cromagnonman

Sort by:
  • 16 Comments
tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
WHAT SOME PEOPLE LEARN FROM LOVE

will fill the hearts and souls. TK U MLJ LV NV

mcollectmcollectover 10 years ago
As always

your stories are not to be missed. Keep up the great work!

bruce22bruce22over 10 years ago
Extremely Enjoyable

Basically this is a wonderful fantasy, no one gets this lucky,ever. But it is great to dream!

papaw64papaw64over 10 years ago
Continue

Please continue the story! Would like to see Warren BTB and destroy her boss!

Have boss dealing with some shady characters he owes money to!

njlaurennjlaurenover 10 years ago
What an incredible story

Like life,sad and happy,up and down,and touching.I appreciated the building parts,coming from that background.Also a story.of family and life,and like others would love to hear more of this story.Btw thanks for the before sparrow fart,what a.great term!

northlandernorthlanderover 10 years ago
Great Story

You have a great touch for finding the best in people, and making what they themselves describe as ordinary people come to life in a story. Congratulations and thanks for a great read.

TMSPTGR3TMSPTGR3over 10 years ago
Astonishing

Not bad for an Aussie. And here I thought Australia was just about critters both inimical (sharks, salties, and misc poisonous snakes) and cute (kangaroos, wallabies, and koalas) and convicts. Oh, well, your wine's not bad either although I never realized kangaroos came in bright red, dayglo orange, and iridescent blue.

Two stories read and ten stars given - you even punctuate.

snathsnathover 9 years ago
loved it

I loved it and is inspired, thanks.

HansTrimbleHansTrimbleover 9 years ago
Very well written

You took an assortment of serious issues and seasoned them with love, humor and common sense, and popped out a winner. I congratulate you and thank you for sharing it with us.

TavadelphinTavadelphinabout 9 years ago
More gentle political commentary and observation

With loving family in the mix -

Tragedy strikes but those closest to you can make it much more bearable -

The way so many societies treat their elders is shameful at best -

Nice job of story telling - thank you

Old_biker_dudeOld_biker_dudeover 7 years ago
One of your best

I enjoyed it a lot.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
A Really Nice Story

Loved it from the beginning to the ending. Square on!

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticalmost 7 years ago
A very nice story

I really liked this story. A real family, once Warren is out of Francine's influence.

I love that the plans go well (Colonel John "Hannibal" Smith) ;)

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

Diecast1Diecast1almost 3 years ago

A very good story. It deserves 5* AAAA++++

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I found him licking up his own cum pretty disgusting, please cut it out, it serves no point except as a turn off.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

A gift from a Master Author!

The Hoary Cleric

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userCromagnonman@Cromagnonman
I'm a pretty normal average male, chronologically well over 18 but psychologically I'm not so sure. I have been writing as a hobby for many years and now that I have time on my hands I am looking to become more professional at it. I enjoy reading, morning walks along the river...