by Cromagnonman
will fill the hearts and souls. TK U MLJ LV NV
Basically this is a wonderful fantasy, no one gets this lucky,ever. But it is great to dream!
Please continue the story! Would like to see Warren BTB and destroy her boss!
Have boss dealing with some shady characters he owes money to!
Like life,sad and happy,up and down,and touching.I appreciated the building parts,coming from that background.Also a story.of family and life,and like others would love to hear more of this story.Btw thanks for the before sparrow fart,what a.great term!
You have a great touch for finding the best in people, and making what they themselves describe as ordinary people come to life in a story. Congratulations and thanks for a great read.
Not bad for an Aussie. And here I thought Australia was just about critters both inimical (sharks, salties, and misc poisonous snakes) and cute (kangaroos, wallabies, and koalas) and convicts. Oh, well, your wine's not bad either although I never realized kangaroos came in bright red, dayglo orange, and iridescent blue.
Two stories read and ten stars given - you even punctuate.
You took an assortment of serious issues and seasoned them with love, humor and common sense, and popped out a winner. I congratulate you and thank you for sharing it with us.
With loving family in the mix -
Tragedy strikes but those closest to you can make it much more bearable -
The way so many societies treat their elders is shameful at best -
Nice job of story telling - thank you
I really liked this story. A real family, once Warren is out of Francine's influence.
I love that the plans go well (Colonel John "Hannibal" Smith) ;)
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.
I found him licking up his own cum pretty disgusting, please cut it out, it serves no point except as a turn off.