All Comments on 'A New Lesson'

Loved the first page. Bringing in Becky detracted from the warmth and loss of innocence that was building. The addition of Becky made it an ordinary MFF story and less of a First Time. Good try... stay with it... you have promise.

Such a nice Hot story, to bad there was never a follow up chapter. MPower only wrote this story since 2006. Hope he is doing well, and takes up writing for us again.