All Comments on 'A New Life Ch. 01'

I neeeeeed a part 2

Quite a good fantasy story, not the best but not the worst, by far.

This line -

"That was not what we usually do."

seemed out of place though,

Please more

I would love to read more and see what happens when they all decide to play.

keep this going.

I've submitted part two and should hopefully be available in the next 3 or 4 days once the editorial review is done. Thankyou for the positive feedback.

Very interesting twists and turns. Extremely well written. I’m anxiously awaiting chapter 2!

I can not wait to read more of your writing!

Love the perspectives waiting for chapter 2 !

I just found this and I love it

More please

Can you take a pic of you and your sister and post it for your avatar? I bet she's crazy hot like you are. I can't wait for you to actually get mom involved too. Keep the chapters cumming!

Oh as a sub myself, that story had me so wet and i can't wait to read the next chapters. Just hope i can get through them without having to clean myself up. xxxx