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by RonCabo

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goducks1goducks1about 5 years ago
good second chapter

5 stars! it was a little short, but i think you used this chapter as a set-up to the next chapter! which i'm looking forward to reading. i think the best part is Lauren being both very sexual with the family and yet confused by their intentions. its a nice suspense builder.

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Thanks to all of you who have read and enjoyed my stories. I appreciate all of the comments, both good and the few not so good, and the high ratings. If you are new to my stories, it would probably be helpful to read them in the order they were written. The newer stories mi...

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