All Comments on 'A New Morning'

I enjoyed reading both of your stories, I hope you continue with these two for more sexy times.

I really like this piece. It's fun and light and sweet and flirty. Our two main characters are both enjoyable to read about. Kudos.

Thank you for the kind words -- I'm working on a third story in this series, but I suppose I'll have to publish it in a different category lol.

As for my overzealous, can't-just-contact-me-in-private reader, I deleted that old account before starting this one and am both revising my old content and working on new stories.

I really like your two characters Kris and Tony.

They’re respectful of each other. The first-time dialogue is witty, cute, and sassy yet always caring. After your first chapter, I wasn’t sure where these two college students were headed, but I’m looking forward to the next part of their journey.

Word choice is clear, sentence structure is varied, mechanics are good. All that stuff that earned you A’s from your high school English teachers. I hope at least one was pretty.

5 Stars I really enjoy your writing!

I agree with Squarey Bob... what a cute sweet couple you've created in your writing! I love it! also very sexy in their explorations of each other. Thanks for all of the work you put into writing and editing this piece.