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Click here"Oh, shut up. We just coupled like three times. But I don't expect you to give me your varsity jacket or anything." She paused, gave me one last kiss, a quick one, then handed me my shirt. "Now go."
"Okay." I put my shirt back on, opened the door, walked out, then peeked back in one more time. "I miss you already."
"Get out of here," she chuckled with a wave, then pushed the door closed.
I walked back to my room, noting that the activity level seemed to be increasing on the floor. I let myself into my room, found my roommate Blake sitting in front of the TV. "So you're alive, eh?" he said in greeting. "We were going to send a search party out for you."
"'We?'" I asked.
"Sure. A whole bunch of us were worried about you when you were nowhere to be found when we got back from the party last night. Since your coat was still here we figured you'd been suddenly abducted or something," Blake said, a knowing look in his eye.
"Nah. I was just around the dorm."
"I know, dork. I think everyone knows. You? And Kris? Weren't exactly quiet this morning."
I blushed. "Yeah. It was...pretty awesome."
"Well I'm glad she lost it to someone like you instead of some random hookup," he replied. "So, how did she rate?"
"Best I've ever had. Honestly," I stated, then sat down at my desk to try to get back to work on the paper I'd been writing the night before.
I agree with Squarey Bob... what a cute sweet couple you've created in your writing! I love it! also very sexy in their explorations of each other. Thanks for all of the work you put into writing and editing this piece.
I really like your two characters Kris and Tony.
They’re respectful of each other. The first-time dialogue is witty, cute, and sassy yet always caring. After your first chapter, I wasn’t sure where these two college students were headed, but I’m looking forward to the next part of their journey.
Word choice is clear, sentence structure is varied, mechanics are good. All that stuff that earned you A’s from your high school English teachers. I hope at least one was pretty.
Thank you for the kind words -- I'm working on a third story in this series, but I suppose I'll have to publish it in a different category lol.
As for my overzealous, can't-just-contact-me-in-private reader, I deleted that old account before starting this one and am both revising my old content and working on new stories.
I really like this piece. It's fun and light and sweet and flirty. Our two main characters are both enjoyable to read about. Kudos.