All Comments on 'A New Office Exhibit'

Been there myself

Fine story, but seems like a part 1 with Alicia, with much more to follow. The part at the very end with Josie seems like a diversion. Please follow up with more between Alicia and Jason.

A pleasure to read. I'm going to add you to my list because I get a sense that you've more interesting things to write about and a skillful way of writing about them. And, BTW, writing careers are never really aborted. They just go through their inevitable cycles, which unfortunately sometimes include spells of silence.