All Comments on 'A New Ray of Light'

that story sucked ass. no one talks like that. the plot was horrible. wasn't even the least bit sexy. total disappointment

"Hamlet by Shakespeare"? Glasses? Perhaps you haven't piled it up thick enough, perhaps you could give her a limp and a stutter too, and make all the jocks laugh at her, and point out that anyone who has a brain is a freak. This is cliched garbage. How dare you insult people like this, and try to drag them down to your illiterate, joyless level.

It might have its downsides, but the situational concept wasn't too bad. This story obviously had more to do with backround relationships than the actual sex. I feel that the author had it in the right place, and all that's needed is a little more experience and creativity.

completely unbelievable...there is no way that Kate would be off the hook for killing three people. it's almost like a bad movie or something.

Though there were implausible bits I thought it was very well written and conveyed all the right loving emotions. To the people leaving rude comments about how there isn't enough sex, note that this story is in the Romance section because that's what it is, very romantic.

I liked it, it was very romantic...I wasnt too sure about her killing and being let go for 3 murders, but otherwise it was a beautiful story...seemed to involved a little dominance and submission ; )

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This was beautiful sweet and well written.Please write more.