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All Comments on 'A New Sensation'

by mojobwoikin

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Tman77Tman77over 15 years ago
not bad but

Not bad but you switched from 3rd person to 1st halfway through, and it was confusing. Maybe get an editor to read through next story before posting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Uh...

The story was alright, but it switched POV's during it, and it made it pretty hard to read.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
AS A BEATER STORY IT FULFILLS ITS TASK

coupled with wishes, its similar sans the middle cream filler. TK U MLJ LV NV

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