All Comments on 'A New Toy'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great first chapter love to see more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Crap. Couldn’t read past “ The tit had a nice heft, like a Ziplock bag full of Jello covered in smooth skin.” What?!? Who writes a line like that?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

One of the best stories I've read in while. Really captured the narrator's delicious dominance. Hope to see more!

kinkboikinkboiabout 3 years ago

"The tit had a nice heft, like a Ziplock bag full of Jello" Ridiculous.

thedusty1thedusty1about 3 years ago

Sold! Can't believe how much I loved this chapter & how much I want more. Great start & writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story. Can’t wait to hear more

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