All Comments on 'A New Way of Seeing Things Ch. 14'

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mrsmetoomrsmetooabout 10 years ago
wonderful

I can't wait to see what happens. Gwen has truly inspired me <3

MrBondsMrBondsover 4 years ago
Luke Warm

The writing is fine, as usual, but this chapter is quite tame - even boring. The fantasy at the end of the chapter could have been much hotter. The photographer could have leashed Gwen like a dog for several photos (consistent with earlier fantasies) then fucked her like a bitch in heat.

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerrover 3 years ago
The prospect of posing

So it's the prospect of posing that turned Gwen on?

Not the women's bodies? ;->

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3/23/19 For all those wondering, yes there is more to come. Real-life has been very busy and finding time to write has been difficult. Gwen and Tim (and Natalie, and Cricket et al) will continue! We are a married couple who, while monogamous ourselves, believe that humans are...