by BusyBadger
The writing is fine, as usual, but this chapter is quite tame - even boring. The fantasy at the end of the chapter could have been much hotter. The photographer could have leashed Gwen like a dog for several photos (consistent with earlier fantasies) then fucked her like a bitch in heat.
So it's the prospect of posing that turned Gwen on?
Not the women's bodies? ;->