All Comments on 'A New Way of Seeing Things Pt. 03 Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Really

Way to short an lacked enough substance to keep me interested like other chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Love the series

Cant wait for each chapter to arrive, thanks for keeping us entertained

singleotsingleotalmost 8 years ago
nice build up

Hope you have the next part well under way, looking forward to it, as always.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Out heroine keen to display the toys and another man in the mix. This just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Always arousing and delicious

So much going on, love it, teasing..Loved Natalies quick kiss on Gwen's playground,

always totally enjoyable, keep us guessing, love the girl girl delicious detailed pleasures..Loved the Harold episode, Gwen and Natalie should take Cricket shoe shoe shopping...Wishful thinking..Love all your directions..Hot, hot and hotter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Just a tease.

I get that you're building up to something good, but I hope the next chapter arrives soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Fantastic !

Likable characters - great story - cannot wait for the next chapter !

Thanks!

blondielover46blondielover46almost 8 years ago
You're killing me!

I absolutely love this story(probably my all time favorite). I love the character development and how real they seem. I realize that good things come to those who wait, but waiting for each new installment is excruciating. Then you leave us with a cliffhanger like this. Might go insane waiting for the next installment. Please keep up the great work!

Desireeb1Desireeb1almost 8 years ago
So good

One of my fav stories on here. I really wish Tim would get involved with her and Natalie more. Been teasing it out for ages now. Please please upload a new chapter soon!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Let tim get involved with cricket and gwen

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerrover 3 years ago
Talk about a cliffhanger!

You sure know how to get your readers to the next chapter! ;->

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3/23/19 For all those wondering, yes there is more to come. Real-life has been very busy and finding time to write has been difficult. Gwen and Tim (and Natalie, and Cricket et al) will continue! We are a married couple who, while monogamous ourselves, believe that humans are...