All Comments on 'A New Way of Seeing Things Pt. 03 Ch. 12'

Ah, the first gentle contact among the three of them. Something I've been wondering how long it would take before it happened. Very well written to preserve the hesitancy of first contact. Excellent chapter!!

As always, very exciting and enjoyable. Looking forward to the next one!

I just wait with inpatient interest for every episode, the story is so well-written as it develops every different aspect of so many different people. Love this whole saga with all it's twist and turns. Just the job busy badger.

So worth waiting for... it means so much more than some stroke story when the reader is totally invested in properly rounded believable characters. Long may this story continue.

There really should be a six-starts option for a story that's been this good for this long.

BusyBadger,

I am so enjoying this entire series - thanks so much for writing and sharing your stories with us.

My regards,

Tsememgb

Laughing

Love it of course ....

Congrats on another fine piece of writing

I've never commented on a story before, but this is such an incredibly written series that I had to let you know. I anxiously await each installment, and can identify with your characters so completely. Thank you, and please keep this going forever, lol!!!

This story is so engrossing ....I also find myself looking forward to the next chapter .....but so far the complete story is such an erotic tale .....it'd make a great film albeit a rather long one 😊😊😊😊....please keep writing with the fervent Imagination you so obviously have !!

That must have been the most erotic piece that I have ever read. WOW!!!

That is the wait between chapters, painful. Even knowing that it will be near a month before we see the next one, that does not stop me from looking nearly daily for the next episode.

With Cricket's near 2sum, I hope that is in the offing, came so close.

And next the photo session, argh!!!....................................................

I love It!

It gets beter and better, hotter and hotter.

I can't wait for the next episode.

Amazing update from you. Had a throbbing hard on after reading it. Keep posting regularly. I love your story.

I wait in anticipation each month for another installment of this great story. I have been waiting for months for Cricket to share Time and Gwen's bed. This story keeps getting better and would make a great stand alone book.

Thanks for the story,

Bubba

Unbelievable. If I wrote this well I would quit my day job. I love the depth of the character development in this series, it helped really draw me in to the stories for hours at a time. The intimate passages are well spaced and presented in great taste. The story is believable and shows a good grip on plausibility. I am thinking you must have some plumbing and/or construction as well as equestrian background to work with or you have researched well. All in all, my favorite series in nearly 10 years of following Literotica. Keep it up. I so look forward to future installments.

You surely know how to build a story which captivates an audience and grasp their attention. You have got a lot of people always looking forward to the next edition with great continuity.

Keep them coming!

Thanks for the read I intensely enjoyed how you kept wanting me to read more it kept me craving thanks so much

very detailed and erotic. well written.

Hot Damn!

Incredibly erotic and hot. But how nice for Gwen that she gets to have both Cricket and Tim but neither of them can touch each other. It’s an incredibly selfish relationship.

Looks like the series has ended so if no one has any objections I'd like to play around with it a little bit (no, not that, the story you jerk).

Gwen: "I'd like to be in the middle, if that's alright with you two."

Tim: "Hey, don't I ever get a say in any of this?"

Cricket: "She knows which way you'll be facing in the morning, Tim."

Yall, have a good one.

Finally, the chapter ends and I can take a breath. I didn’t realize that I was holding it in for so long. OMG, the teasing created by all 3-hesitant characters was so delicious. You really know how to create sensuous scenes. The inadvertent touching was as hot as full blown sex. You really are a master wordsmith and story teller. Bravo ! 10-😊😊😊😊😊 😊😊😊😊😊’s