All Comments on 'A New World'

I got to the licking the shit hole part.

Can't you guys get a thrill without this SHIT stuff??

God it must taste as awful as it smells. YES?__ NO?__

why so many exclamation marks? In one four paragraph set, I counted one period, the rest of the sentences were exclamation marks!!!

Nice idea but your use and abuse of the english language is atrocious. Next time PLEASE utilize the services of the volunteer editors at Lit.

I found the story line a little too unbelieveable that a strictly heterosexual woman - however frustrated - would allow herself to be seduced by another woman on virtual first encounter!