All Comments on 'A New York Haunting: Pt. 07'

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WargamerWargamerover 1 year ago

A bit tedious, but useful background info. We haven’t got to the wedding yet.

4/5

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Disinhibited, the hypnotized girl

Threw the young doctor’s heart in a whirl

Her sweet exploration

Earned his firm adoration

While the mystery began to unfurl

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fantastic! I loved the salacious tension of Peter's advances and then the slow build up to release during the hypnosis.

kiwiplumkiwiplumover 1 year ago

Wargamer- "tedious"?? Not sure why you're reading this, maybe you just want to get to the end

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