All Comments on 'A Newlywed's Awakening'

She should have contacted HR.

loved the slow seduction

The writing is really bad, in the first two paragraphs you write 'I loved it' more than 15 times, it was like reading the handwriting of a child. Seduction was not slow since you have already declared that the heroine was going to be seduced over and over again. The whole thing with the paragraphs just wrecked the flow of the story (if any). 2*