All Comments on 'A Nice Surprise For Brian'

I can't wait to find out what is going to happen to the little slut. Will she give in and enjoy? My guess is that she will enjoy it either way.

You got me wet and waiting

This screams for a part two ... maybe even a three!

WASTE MY TIME READING THE CRAP. IT MIGHT NOT BE CRAP TO OTHERS ..BUT IT CERTAINLY IS TO ME ..AND I RESENT YOU FOR THE TIME WASTED

... nice start.

This story is fascinating and arousing. Keep it coming!

crap.

Elmore Lenard couldnt have done better. Not bi myself, but I have no trouble going along for the ride. Bit of a stretch her not sucking or doing anal, but then she is giving up control, not her fault.

Chilley

The British Speak is Too Fuckin' Proper For Me!

The twat fuck of a wife is looking for a gang bang,and her husband wants to watch his friends fuck the shit out of her! Let's call a fuck a fuck!

Queer story. Should be in gay section. Stupid story !!!!

GAY, not LOVING WIVES. Twit!

don't care that its gay ...just the nasty ending

This reads as though you’re American desperately trying to write a smut version of Bridget Jones. No one ever says ‘sod’ nearly as much.. nor the other Englishisms. Also she’s not a mature woman at 32..