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All Comments on 'A Night at the Club'

by The_Technician

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1Exhibitionist1Exhibitionistover 4 years ago
Similar to Earlier Story

This was too similar to your earlier story: The Slime Pit at The O Club. Having read that work several times, I felt I was rereading the same story with only name changes for the characters and the club.

Your original stuff is really entertaining and erotic. A sequel to the first story would have been more enjoyable to read than this retelling of the same story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
Part 2 please

This was fun and I would love a second part to this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well written. Predictable. Not overly erotic.

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I was born in the Midwest, but have traveled extensively throughout the United States and Canada. Currently I am full-time camping throughout the United States and Canada and spending my time writing for both fun and profit. Books with longer stories such as the kind posted on...