All Comments on 'A Night at the Last Chance Saloon'

by duskshade

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
A cave man on motor bike!

A kind of guy who live fast and die young crushing his motor into a tree.

Or, considering the way life works out mysteriously, a tree would fall upon the pocket Rocket!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Sweet!

I like the way you write. Fresh and clean, this read like a wet dream and it flowed right into the 'movie in my head' type of visualization.

Keep it up!

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