All Comments on 'A Night at the Library'

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cheesy80scheesy80sabout 16 years ago
Fairly hot.

While a standard seduction story, your prose won it over. You created depth and atmosphere with, it seems, a careful selection of words and descriptions. Nothing flowery, but full of viseral impact. This made the sex even hotter. Great job!

PoutineFanPoutineFanabout 16 years ago
Very nicely done :)

I enjoyed it quite a bit. T'was quite hot... hope we see more from you someday :)

wdelanderwdelanderalmost 16 years ago
wow... very erotic

Why don't I ever meet women like that?

;-)

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