All Comments on 'A Night at the Luau'

Good story, nice set up, dialog well written, too. But four women went to a party dedicated to debauchery, looking for action, and only one hooked up (so far). How about a follow up story, or two, or three, about the other three women? Maybe even one about what happens if or when the host sees any of the four in action, or if the recordings find their way onto the internet? Lots of possibilities that are worth developing into a short series. In other words, more!