by Shoshisexy
Enjoyed it - a spicier read than I expected. My only wish is that I could have been sitting in seat directly in front of you.
Hon you did well with this. I could see Dom's influence on the story:)........ You know who this is.... Damsel sends regards and said it gave her ideas:)..... Except..... Well you can figure that out:)..... I would like to see you do more work of your own though and mayhaps you should try to explore your Darker passions:)....
Two heads are better than one thatis what they alway say. I think erotic thoughts every time I go to the Drive in, in Eden. Will definitly be thinking about this story when I am waiting in the popcorn line.
I liked the closing conversation in the car. Makes a delightful romp much more believeable....
Shoshana ~ very nicely done. I want to go to the movies now..... keep writing.
Loved it, until I realized it wasn't anonymous at all. Oh well, I still got off!