All Comments on 'A Night for a Threesome Ch. 01'

It starts out with a supposed threesome with you, your wife, and another woman. With you imagining two women going at your cock.

It quickly turns into a threesome for your wife, Jeff, and his woman.

What the fuck did you get out of it?

Fuck this shit!

If all people don't get to play, I'm not interested. I'm not a cuckold wanna-be!

But you do need an editor.

I don't know where to begin.

This story is all over the place. Your first paragraph makes no sense at all.

The constant repetition of "my wife" is very annoying. It is also less personal than just calling her by her name. You established in the beginning who your wife is. You don't need to keep reminding us of her status.